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hah the vocal is a sounds from BodyCount ( Metal )

A real relaxing track, sonot really driveby. You did a good job on the track though. It could be totally used in the GTA's .
Nice for the melody
Nice for the bassthumb I like it
Nice working with the snares

Good job

Greetz Duba
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ripeaze2 responds:

thanks man yeah it was kinda hard to come up with a title so i said fuck it..lol i suck at coming up with titles

not bad for firsttimer

To much treble on the kick , you should reduce it, cause its way to heavy. Melody is good but repeating a lot. its starting to get boring after a while.

If you need help on fruityloops just ask me or PM me. I'll be glad to help

Greetz Duba
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hi there Nub

I was writing a review when suddenly newgrounds started upgrading.

That vocal ? is it moby ? I sure recognise it. Not sure if its moby though.
Nice work on beat
Nice work on melody
Nice mastered
LOVE the guitar. Is it a sample ? or selfmade ? cause its totally beautifull.

Greetz Duba
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nubbinownz responds:

The sample is depeche mode enjoy the silence. The guitar is self made :) i will head over and go check out your song later on when i get some free time for sure.

Funny french

I understand French , but this is really weird french. Its got a little EKKEKEE to it. Really greasy rapping. you know when you say wack , it more sounds like WHHHEEEIK. Funny song , nice beat , normally these hiphop gets boring after a while, but with the rapping it doesn't .

Greetz Duba

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Loki responds:

Probably because it's Quebec French with a huge accent... and random words sometimes ;)

Cool

The start made me think of the secret of mana games. You used a nice vocal that fits perfectly with the rest of the song. You didn't get repetitive, Its not boring at all. Its really a chill out song. Not really for dancing but fun to listen to

Greetz Duba

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Nice twist to it

Nice dancing music. It has a nice meldoy to it. The beat is also well made. Nice way of using the snares ( sounds a bit armylike ). Your notting getting repetitive and that is good. You mastered the whole thing and thats fine.

The things that I miss are some panning effects. Maybe some X-Y-modulation.
Overall not really bad. Good job on this one

Greetz Duba

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Hi there

Its not bad remix. But the instruments you are using are pretty primitive. Have you tried using sytrus ? It has a lot of nice basses and syths and strings. You could also use it to make your own sounds. Or use the 3osc to create nice sound.
You beat is not really bad. About the high hats, just fill you whole line , and lower the volume of of the less important ones to create effects. You used you high hats like " tictictic .. paure ... tictic tic ". If you use them over the whole way , you'll have a more humanlike effect. Try not to stack reverbs and normals in numbers like this.

You melody is not bad. just the bells that you are using give a weird effect. They are kinda the wrong instruments in the wrong number if you know what i mean.

Anyways this is a good first attempt at Fruityloops. My first songs sucked waaaaaay harder than this.
If you need any help just PM me. I'll be glad to help you out. I like supporting new artist.
Sorry for not writing a lot of possitive ^^ but the review is already long enough as it is.

Greetz Duba

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Not as good as the previous

I liked the previous better. This sounds like the wrong instruments are used. The beat is also pretty repetitive and of rythm. Try to make more like your last ^^ Cause this is not really nice.

Greetz Duba

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linkfanzeldamario responds:

I try to do my best, thanks for your comments =)

Could be good for an intro in a game

Would be nice as an intro in a RPG or something. I like the melody , although its probably MIDI. Good job on mastering , choice of instruments , compression. etcetc

Greetz Duba

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linkfanzeldamario responds:

Thanks for your comment !

Boring = chill , its how you look at it.

pretty chill track you made ^^. I like listening to it. Its really relaxing. I'm not gonna download it cause I know I won't listen to it anymore.
Overall you did a nice job on melody , mastering , compression etcetc

Greetz Duba

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Zani responds:

Thx for the Review!
i hope you chilled out :D

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