here we go :)
I'm a fan of this kind of stuff :)
The good
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Nice melody, and a nice synth to craft it.
The percussion is nice. And compressed nicely.
The synth in the back fit well
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The melody gets a bit repetitive after a while. You should check some tutorials on chord progression. I will help you to improve your work a lot :)
The bass should be a bit louder.
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9/10 5/5 5.00 / 5.00 (+ 5.00)
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Sounds very royal
I like this piece. Reminds me of RPG's on SNES.
The good
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You worked out the melody very well. You put stresses on the notes ( if they weren't in the MIDI ). The use of bells is nice in this track. The fast paced snares sound very royal.
I could see this in a flash.
Nothing bad to say. Well done
10/10 5/5 4.60 / 5.00 (+ 0.60)
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Love this
I always loved the song.
The good
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The intro is nice. I didn't know it was gonna turn into trance at first. I alway forget to check the genre first.
Nice breakbeat to start up. It almost sounds like an intro for a mellow tv show :p
(thats good btw)
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The synth is nice. Altough my speaker seem to dislike it at some points. when it stacks with the square bass I get a small distortion.
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Overall this was a very nice piece of art. I absolutely love it. Faved it aswell.
When you bring up something similar throw me a PM. I'd like to review it aswell then :)
10/10 5/5 4.42 / 5.00 (+ 0.23)
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BAAAM ZEROBOMBERS !!!
Very nice piece of art.
The good
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loving the fast piano melodies. The guitar is also well done. I wanna play some smash brothers again after hearing this.
The percussion is nice, its hard to create a percussion over a MIDI.
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Overall not too bad. I like the start the most.
8/10 5/5 2.80 / 5.00 (+ 1.32)
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thanks. yeah you're right about the midi percussion thing. i've just downloaded a software update for garageband and this was my first time using all the new instrument sounds that came with it.
Nice start
I'm really into house lately. I really like it
The good
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You spread ideas over a long time, which is good to create an entrancing atmosphere.
I'm liking the melody so far. Sounds a bit minimal.
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I wouldn't layer claps together with the snares if I was you. Or maybe just for the intro.
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I decent piece of work. Throw me a PM when the next version is up.
10/10 5/5 3.64 / 5.00 (+ 0.51)
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Kewl naaiz
I always loved these oldschool pieces of music. You use oscilator to make the synth ?
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The melody is crafted very well. If this was used in an actual game I would be get nervous by it. Thats a good thing.
I like the melody that comes in a 0.38.
Persuccion is nice.
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You should edit an ending for this or make it loop. One of those.
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I really enjoyed this piece of art.
10/10 5/5 (unchanged)
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thank you for review :)
and yes i have downloaded your song called 'shooting star' its really good! im checking out your other songs too now!!
I'll comment what it needs !!!
Use chords for string. It will add an atmosphere of mystery. If you don't know what I mean by this, listen to my " in the eye of the storm ". Its a similar track.
The good
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I like the melody, this could be used in a flash. In a sad scene or something. As I said before, use chords.
I like how you layer the strings over each other.
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Percussion is good, well timed. Ofc you're gonna improve the soundquality of it. As you say in the author comments
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Overall not a bad piece. And easy one to review, scince its so short.
Work on it and it will turn out to be great.
7/10 5/5 (unchanged)
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thanks for so good comment!
yes, it might be usen in the flash... somewhat sad scene or something.
i try to make the chords. as always i have made them. on the WIPs i haven't always done them.
yea, the percussion is coming to be better, as i promise. and better. not so empty. but still not too much.
thanks for the 5! u was a great reviewer!
Flashgame music
At the start I thought it was gonna suck. It wasn't too bad after all
The good
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Percussion is very well done. Sounds almost like a real drummer.
You create a nice atmosphere. This could be good for a dark flashmovie or game.
Good panning effects on the claps.
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Its like you didn't master the claps. I'm guessing you used raw samples for it and didn't modify them. Remaster them if you get the chance. Filter a bit and add some reeverb. It will give your song extra dimension.
The bass and lower piano notes tend to clash together at some points and create a blur. You can reduce this by panning effects. Make one more left and one more right. Or use filter.
The intro is just one synth playing. When you start your songs you should use intropercussion. It will give the song extra dimensions.
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Overall this isn't too bad. But there are still some things I'd change if I was you.
8/10 5/5
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Sweet! Thanks for the advice! I will try to incorporate them sometime if I get a chance.
Thanks for the review!
Yeah house is fun to do
Nice effects. I like it
Good stuff
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You added a lot of variation over a long time. It doesn't get boring at all. In fact it works a bit entrancing.
I love the synths you used at 3.15
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At some points when the kick and bass layer over each other. There is some small distortion.
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Overall a very nice piece of work.
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Thanks for the in depth review! I'll check out your stuff for sure!
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